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Margaret Somerville's avatar

There you are

Close enough to be who I thought you were

Who I wanted you to be

Who you masked yourself as:

The life of the party;

The compassionate carer;

The twin to my flame.

I saw you in this place before you were

And shaped you into being

And so you came to inhabit the daily rituals of my life:

To bring new life;

To walk beside;

To nurture spirit.

But this world was not meant for you.

It’s meant for me alone:

Where new life greets me daily with the dawn;

Where I rise after falling to walk the grassy path;

Where I tend to my spirit with a poem a day.

In those last still moments of my dreamworld night

There you are

And I ask you why.

This place is not for you anymore.

I’ve dreamed you out of being.

And you may go.

I cross the threshold from sleeping to waking

And know that now it’s safe.

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SJ Reinardy's avatar

Absolutely beautiful.

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Margaret Somerville's avatar

Thank you!

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Larry Brickner-Wood's avatar

This is so beautiful, Margaret. You draw a wonderful picture of intimacy and connection, leaving and loss. . “But this world was not meant for you…”. That line resonates do clearly in my heart.

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Margaret Somerville's avatar

Thank you for your presence. I so deeply appreciate your responses.

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Becky Schmidt's avatar

Dream Visitors

My grandmothers occasionally visit me

Years after they’ve left this world

As I lay in bed unconsciously sorting out my wild mind

We’re always somewhere familiar–a sense of love palpable

One will hug me with all her strength

And tell me, “you’re doing alright, kid.”

My soul mate–my best friend

My heart is always full of love and tears when I awake

My other Grandma visits to show me how misunderstood she’d been

Her whole life–no one saw her anxiety, no one helped her accept herself

I promise I see her–I promise I will learn from her pain

I promise her I hold no hard feelings for the things she did when scared

They both remind me of my power

The power they rarely got to fully show the world

They took on a world that had no interest in seeing them succeed

Both learned to hold their boundless strength close and quiet

Each of them taking their causes with ruthless diligence

Week after week, they sought the good of others

Both thoroughly uninterested in “causing a fuss”

But refusing to not fuss over others when needed

I always awake from these visits with new insights about me

I see a patchwork of their lives as I look in the mirror

Their love embroidered in the growing number of crow's feet around my eyes

Their wisdom stitched into the laugh lines around my mouth

I tell them to rest well

I tell them I’ll do them proud

In all my imperfections–in all my weaknesses

I’ll embody their strengths as best I can

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Nicole Boehrig's avatar

So powerful. The way you craft this story, the messages you receive and the solace you give them and yourself. 🫶🏼

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Jane Anderson's avatar

This is beautiful. What a gift to be visited by your grandmothers in your dreams.

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Becky Schmidt's avatar

Thank you! It really has been a gift for sure.

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A. Wilder Westgate's avatar

For a long time, I didn't remember

most of my dreams - only the bad ones,

really. I have spent so much of my waking life

imagining beautiful things, only to find that

my days didn't quite measure up. I wonder if,

in order to save myself from another

shattered ideality, my mind decided that,

at least upon waking, it would hide away

any good dreams, so they couldn't be

dampened by reality.

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Dr. M's avatar

Love the last line! Powerful!

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Larry Brickner-Wood's avatar

A. This is do thoughtful and wise, and resonates so deeply with me. I often just recalled the nightmares, not the other . I have been daydreaming my whole life. And spinning yarns and stories in my head in the waking hours , sometimes I reckoned my subconscious needed a rest!

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Karen Mawyer's avatar

Dreamworld - A visit with old friends

There was a time when a couple of dreams would visit me with regularity.

I would greet them with recognition and settle my sleeping self into their arms.

In one, I was the driver of my small car, with others along for the ride.

We always travelled the same path, on a high road, narrow, surrounded by lush greenery.

There was always a stream below.

And at some point in this dream, we would always come to a dead end - an alarming break in the roadway.

The dream would end.

A different dream involved an elevator.

I was in an office building, heading somewhere.

I entered the elevator, but could not get to where I needed to go.

The elevator would careen wildly, up and around, would travel horizontally.

I needed to find a way out so I could get to my destination.

The dream would end.

Ah my old friends, how is it that you no longer visit me?

Can I hope that just maybe I got to where I was meant to be?

Musical refrain - "Hello darkness my old friend,

I've come to talk with you again,

Because a vision softly creeping,

Left its seeds while I was sleeping...." - Simon and Garfunkel

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Jane Anderson's avatar

Love this line — I would greet them with recognition and settle my sleeping self into their arms.

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j.h.kucher's avatar

A dream can land

like a bird -

lightly, as a sign

of hope, or joy.

A dream can land

like a space capsule,

with a big splash

and lots of cheering.

A dream can land

like an Airbus -

fast, loud,

and full of folks

in a hurry to be somewhere else.

A dream can land

like a glass

that slips from your hand,

shattering itself

and your nerves.

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kate gardiner clearlight's avatar

no matter the gleaming fangs, the deep blue river,

the worst-feared consequence,

the ungraspable, terrible beloved, you know

you have glimpsed a herd of wild truths flying,

so real and so mandatory,

you stride across that still thin sill

of waking, slip back into a soft sheath

of body, leave behind the starry rootlets,

the hints of lightning emerged

from your crown in the night,

to walk forth, thoughtfully,

as though carrying a baby bird, with revelations

that must be spoken across the rising steam

of morning.

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Katie Spring's avatar

"A herd of wild truths flying" ❤️❤️❤️

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Larry Brickner-Wood's avatar

Kate, this is a lovely and powerful poem. “As though carrying a baby bird with revelations/that must be spoken across the rising stream/ of morning.” What incredible and beautiful lines yo end this special poem.

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Celeste Zenko's avatar

The ungraspable, terrible beloved. This is all so rich and alive Kate!

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Nancy E. Holroyd, RN's avatar

Kaitlin, I've kept dream journals in the past and used dreams in therapy to help uncover deep areas of hurt, forty years ago. This poem is a beautiful representation of what dreams can do for us. My poem will come much later today.

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Kaitlin Curtice's avatar

Can’t wait to read it!

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Larry Brickner-Wood's avatar

Shenandoah

^

Dispatches from the dream world,

Wide open valley

And magical rivers.

Connecting dreams, threading mystery,

Quiet gentle land of deep beauty,

Whispers in the wind;

Of battles fought, won and lost,

Sacred pacts broken by greed and power,

Love’s song carried on autumn winds.

^

Precious daughter of the stars,

Creator of dreams and mystical magic,

I hear you spirit music on the wind,

Smell your sweet grass in my dreams,

Walk again among your deep green forests,

Hold your stories deep in my soul.

^

Swimming through the last moments of sleep,

unspoken prayer healing the broken,

Stars set in motion all that will be;

I sense that yearning call:

When will you come home,

again?

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Katie Spring's avatar

Every night the world ends

I sink into the ether

Let my spirit fly to

The waiting stars

Where darkness sows

So much possibility

That it births the world

Anew into a fresh day

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Larry Brickner-Wood's avatar

“That it births the world/anew into a fresh day.” . What a beautiful way to end this poem which starts do magically: “Every night the world end”. A poem song lovely in every way!

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Christian Totty's avatar

Day #4: Dreamworld

wherein we find the endless beginning of all things

wherein the old ones and the new ones create ceremonies

wherein the piercing light and the immense shadows live

wherein you and I are one

wherein time is always also a place

wherein the echo of the Great Mystery moves,

cradling the wide expanse of galaxies

wherein the ocean has no bottom, and

the sky is her extension

wherein the edge is the starting point

wherein heaven is also Earth,

wherein we find each other in between

wherein we are also always every-when

wherein the magnetic night can be a beacon

wherein we live within the story, and

in the dreaming body of the ancient cosmos

wherein the hours hum us into rhythm, and

we mirror the movement of the land

wherein the hawk is our healer

wherein the geese are our griots

wherein strawberry is our sweet-singing sister

wherein the keen listening ear of corn is our elder.

wherein the boundary of here and there is an illusion

wherein the border of my heart and yours is an epic myth

wherein we retell the stories of creation

wherein we un-silo our silences and start speaking

wherein we surrender into the wave of resonance

wherein deep calls unto deep, and

we breathe inside the unfolding miracle.

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Larry Brickner-Wood's avatar

A beautiful poem, Christian. I love your use of a consistent word to begin each prayerful line, and your lovely evocation of the natural world yo sweeten each li e.

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Rachel Louise's avatar

“A lion and a child and a worrisome woman all in one tight cage of my own being.” I love that ❤️

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Kaitlin Curtice's avatar

♥️♥️♥️♥️

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Jane Anderson's avatar

This morning I awoke with nothing perceptible from my walk in the dreamworld.

Oh I have memories still of the scary dreams from childhood.

I still hold deep memory of the messages and signs that have come through in my dreams over the years.

But most nights I dream - so many dreams - and wake recalling nothing. I wish I could carry my pen and journal with me into the dreamworld. Capturing something to bring forth into the day.

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kate gardiner clearlight's avatar

this wish is so tender, so honest… it feels like a prayer to the dream maker.

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Jane Anderson's avatar

Thank you. Indeed a prayer.

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Christian Totty's avatar

Beautiful poem, Kaitlin. It reminds me of the Strength card in Tarot.

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Kaitlin Curtice's avatar

Thank you 🥹♥️♥️

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Karen Mawyer's avatar

Thanks for this poem, Kaitlin. It brings tears to my eyes. I especially love the last 3 lines.

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Rachel Louise's avatar

In my dreamworld

Little is known to me

Yet all is familiar to

The person I am *there*

However random and confounding,

The dreamworld Me believes her

Purpose is to figure out the mission,

To go where she is going.

In my dreamworld

The locations are seldom those of

My so-called real one

They are seldom static, always evolving

One premises melding into another

A dark corridor becomes a field of

Tall grasses that yields a group of

Passengers boarding an elevator

That requires a key

Do I have it? I’m supposed to have it

I’m the one in charge, after all,

In my dreamworld, or am I?

Where am I going, who are these people

Leading me — or am I leading us

To the circular parking garage to nowhere that

Lifts us all into the airplane/spacecraft

Hybrid to an unknown destination?

But the dreamworld doesn’t reveal

The answers I seek, the secret

Of the mission my unconscious mind

Has created for my consideration

For once my energies and strategies

Have all run. out, and I awaken,

The night’s images linger briefly

Then dissolve into

Nothingness…or so I believe, until

The next night, or the night after,

When I revisit the dreamworld

And embark upon that night’s

Obstacle Course of dream terrains

Then awaken again, I am left

Not just with the memories of the

Newest journey, but the other nights’ Ruminations as well,

My mind a growing library, of secret

Literature, an atlas of dreamworld

Landscapes, the scope of which is Yet to be revealed.

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Claire's avatar

Love those last three lines

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Korie's avatar

In the dreamworld

People have no faces,

Or more precisely

No eyes to look into

Nor to recognize…

In the dreamworld

We are all the same,

Not exteriors but

Interior beings defined

By what we speak or do…

In the dreamworld

People are known

By their character,

And the waking world

Would do well to follow.

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