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Beautiful! I love the repetition at the end. Here’s mine (written on a sunny day after a lot of cloudy ones):

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My party drug

My life-is-worth-living draught of

gold

My crack-my-withered-heart-open medicine,

life,

sustaining,

cracking the clouds like eggshells:

I can finally breathe.

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So, so, so good! You wrote what was in my heart.

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So wonderful, I felt I was breathing free reading this. Thank you!

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I love the "party drug" reference. Very nice, Lisa!

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Haha, thanks! It was a reference to a Tumblr post where someone said that they don't realize they have seasonal depression until the sun comes out and they "feel like I've taken a party drug." I can relate. ;)

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I like that description, and empathize so much living in place that can be cloudy and grey for stretches.

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May 2, 2023Liked by Kaitlin Curtice

sunlight

a reminder that

we have made it to

another day

what a blessing

to feel your

warm rays

touch our skin

but not for too long

a reminder to

too much sunlight

is detrimental

a curse of sorts

the lesson we should learn

be in awe and grateful

for the sunlight

but we must be aware

that we need shade

as well

thank you sunlight

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I like this Steven. Thank you for the reminder that we need the full cycle of the earth rhythms, shadows and light, darkness and day...Here in seacoast New Hampshire, we are in a several days of rain period, grateful for the green. the flowers that will bloom, the gardens, springs, wells, lakes and rivers that will prosper, and for for the holy water of life raining down!

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Here

We yearn

Under stratus clouds

Gray cozy heft

Blankets our lives

Here

We’re awed

By water color clouds

Purple marbled

And sockeye red

Here

We revel!

And Praise the brazen sun

Incandescent,

Satiated

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I love "gray cozy heft" that's so descriptive and beautiful!

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I love the descriptive imagery.

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Ah, this feels right. I have no other words to describe how I felt reading this 😊

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This is wonderful Sarah! This is so rich and full, evocative and vibrant in its imagery and depth!

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Sunlight

The elusive wanting of you

The waiting for you

wondering if you will come

There is joy in your presence

A lightness of being

The days when I don’t see you

leave me yearning

Aching for you

Sometimes I see you from afar

Wisps of the essence of you

That remind me

You don’t belong to me

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This is beautiful Donna. Thank you!

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Thank you Larry!

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You are welcome Donna!

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May 2, 2023Liked by Kaitlin Curtice

wake up each morning

turn your face, your life toward

generous sunlight

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May 2, 2023Liked by Kaitlin Curtice

Sunlight

MIA in M-I today

Summer soon?

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Sunlight

Dappling through tree leaves

Leaving a leopard print

On my floor

Warmth

Rising as the day grows older

Leaving a rosy pink hue

On my babies’ cheeks

Energy

Refilling the spaces in my being

Leaving paths of accomplishment

Through my home

Summer

Removing the veil of hibernation

Leaving winter a memory

In my renewed mind

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This absorbs me, Aleesha! Thank you for sharing.

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"Dappling through tree leaves" spoke to me!!

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Sunlight

When I came out of the shadows,

a long road through deep darkness

I looked up and saw your face.

Bright shining in the sunlight

Alive in its beauty,

a sunlight that comes after

all hope is lost.

Resurrected in light,

I cried,

not out of sadness or despair,

but in joy.

I knew I was home.

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The Trees are my friends

The Rain is my cleanse

The Sky gets me high

The Dirt shows me why

The Birds visit

The Feeder sways

They might hum a tune

As the Butterfly plays

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This makes me smile.

The Birds visit

The Feeder sways

They might hum a tune

As the Butterfly plays

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Thank you. I penned that a few months ago and after I saw Kaitlin’s work this morning I was reminded of it. So honored to share it here

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Sunlight

When

I lay

In the sun.

I am

Alive

Again.

For a while.

(even my cat knows this truth) ;)

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What the Sunlight Reveals

The room is cool, dark, peaceful and I am content

For things to remain as they are, whether hidden in plain sight or

Tucked into dim corners.

It is a beautiful day they say. The sun is shining. The sky is blue.

Open the blinds they say. Let the sunlight in.

But if I do, I risk them seeing it all. I risk myself seeing it all.

The scars on the wood, the blemishes on the leather, the dust on the floor.

She does her job so well, the sunlight....illuminating all of the things I would like to hide. She lays them bare and says here, this is the problem, if you cannot see it how can you fix it?

She means well, the sunlight, but this is not the day for illlumination, examination and reflection. So I thank her but close the blinds and send her on her way.

Karri Temple Brackett

May 2, 2023

https://themarvelousandthemundane.com/2023/05/02/what-the-sunlight-reveals/

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This is splendid Karri. I like the notion of letting the light exposes thiings we might not want to see.

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This is wonderful. Important medicine. Thank you so much!

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The greatest power source I know

He energizes me all day long

When He disappears behind the clouds

My motivation begins to slumber

I love the light of Sister Moon

She mystifies my innermost soul

But there is nothing like the Great Sun

To awaken me to the many possibilities

That lie within any moment of any day

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Sunlight

Warmth to my bones

Lifter of my face

Lifter of heart

Lifter of the corners of my mouth

Creator of my best wrinkles

Sunlight is a smile from the sky after a long dreary winter.

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on the rare

blue sky,

sun drunk day

in the middle of january

I slink around

the house chasing

each precious,

golden

slice of

heaven -

always craving

more.

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Beautiful poem :) I wrote two today. Here's one.

Sunlight

I turn to nature,

Smiling, shimmering, shining,

Building myself brick by brick,

Word by word,

I just want to set myself free,

Run in the grass,

Soft kisses down my back

I twist and then I laugh,

I permeate all things,

I am

Everywhere

And everywhere

I am

All things

I permeate

Then I laugh

And I twist

Soft kisses

In the grass

Run free

Word by word

Brick by brick

Smiling,

I just want to turn to

Nature

Everywhere

I am

All things

Permeate

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This is wonderful Jillian. I love the joy in these lines.

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Thank you so much, Larry :)

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Sunlight

It can be held in your hand.

Peel back to mist your fingernails

and notice the sunlight lines,

bright veins that pulse

like the waterfront,

calling up cravings

for cold food.

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