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Lisa Strader's avatar

Beautiful! I love the repetition at the end. Here’s mine (written on a sunny day after a lot of cloudy ones):

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My party drug

My life-is-worth-living draught of

gold

My crack-my-withered-heart-open medicine,

life,

sustaining,

cracking the clouds like eggshells:

I can finally breathe.

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Steven Barbery's avatar

sunlight

a reminder that

we have made it to

another day

what a blessing

to feel your

warm rays

touch our skin

but not for too long

a reminder to

too much sunlight

is detrimental

a curse of sorts

the lesson we should learn

be in awe and grateful

for the sunlight

but we must be aware

that we need shade

as well

thank you sunlight

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