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Chill

immediately brought to mind

a line of song from the 80's

and then another

then I read the wonderful words

of more wonderful poets

on the same subject

and life happens as I

ponder my own words

in the subject

chill

and in my exhaustion

spiritual that exhausts physically

causing emotional numbness

that gives mental fog

so I chill

my words ramble

hopefully poetically

but no worries if they don't

one day this poem

may be edited

or perfected

because today

I chill

taking the words

of my fellow poetry travelers

to heart

I chill

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This is a wonderful, bold experience and experiment! I think you’ve gotten the essence down pat :) Thanks for the bravery and persistence here.

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What a wonderful sentiment and a clever way to frame this prompt! Keep chillin'!

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