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Sometimes I feel like I have only ever

been waiting for the next season,

constantly looking forward,

impatient and unsatisfied,

holding my breath,

feeling stuck.

Now, I inhale,

breathing in this

moment, learning to

appreciate the ebb and flow,

letting everything be what it is,

no longer stuck or unsatisfied -

though still occasionally impatient.

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I love the shape of your poem, it reminds me of constricting, holding, tense as it moves in, and letting go, breathing, embracing as it moves out

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Thank you! It took a bit of moving around but it felt worth the effort.

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Yeah.

Waiting sucks.

Nice.

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