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A landscape love letter

I come from

a valley landscape

mountain slopes

frame East and West

tectonic shifts

basalt flows

and glacial floods

gave birth to the terrain

A layer cake of

lush green old growth

rich red volcanic soils

and flinty blue foothills

give way to the horizon

dense coastal fog prevails

and ancient volcanic peaks

watch over us

A river basin

feeds the valley floor

a mighty flowing heart

and tributary tendrils

a riparian realm

teeming with fertility

I come from

a valley landscape

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This is so beautiful. I love how you circle back with the last two lines, which seemed so ordinary before the imagery in the rest of the poem.

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This is splendid Sarah! I like the framing begiunning and end as well. And the wonderful imagery of a layer cake overlaid onto the landscape. Wonderful work!

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