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Nancy E. Holroyd, RN's avatar

What is it to be alive?

Your death

struck me through

the heart,

An arrow

could not be truer.

And yet you still

seem so alive,

Your presence

as vibrant

in death,

even dearer.

When I see rainbows

and butterflies,

I remember you.

You touched so

many people

when you walked

an earthly path.

Your love shone so bright

while with us,

the glow remains present

while we are apart.

What is it to be alive?

To be present even

in death.

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Chuck's avatar

a thin line

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Margaret Somerville's avatar

Alive in your beautiful words and presence!

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Nancy E. Holroyd, RN's avatar

Thank you, Margaret

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Larry Brickner-Wood's avatar

This is a beautiful poem, Nancy, and a lovely testimony to deep love.

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Nancy E. Holroyd, RN's avatar

Thank you, Larry

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Katie Spring's avatar

look, the sun is

shining and it’s time

to put down

the screen and go

out to the field

get some dirt under

your fingernails again

string up tomatoes

plant the peppers

without the buzz of

a podcast in your pocket

look, I know you

want to guzzle every

conversation, but what if

you drink in the steady pulse

of water through the drip line,

drink in the sounds of beetles

scuttling through straw,

of song sparrows trilling and

hummingbirds humming with

their whole bodies

What if you listened to

the conversations right here

with your muscles and bones

breath and sight

how, like the peas climbing

their trellis, you too

turn toward the sun

alive to everything

that doesn’t need

to be plugged in

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A. Wilder Westgate's avatar

This poem has me so ready to go out and plant today. Thank you!

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Larry Brickner-Wood's avatar

I love this Katie. You define so poetically how listening to the sounds around us are their own form of podcvast. I came home today and my partner was in the garden, working away, getting hands dirty. We chatted and I went for a cycle through this beautiful spring day. And I listened!

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Rachel Louise's avatar

To be alive is more

Than a beating heart

Breathing lungs

Eyes blinking

In the blistering sun.

To be alive is to process, daily

Whatever junk and treasure

The world lifts up

For our consumption.

To be alive is to wish sometimes

To die, hibernate, lie dormant

In the soft cool earth

While the world’s forests burn above

To wait safety until we recover

Ourselves or the tiniest spark

To ignite something new.

To be alive is to know

We are specks barely visible

On a grand horizon and wonder

What our existence means

Amidst incomprehensible vastness.

To be alive is to keep living

Uncertain of the precise meaning

Believing God created us

That our uniqueness is the point

To share ourselves—flaws, doubts,

And everything that lives within

Our striving imperfect souls.

To be alive, truly,

Is to say, I am here, ready

To be among the living and

Live in memory and service

Of those who came before

To cultivate a life of purpose and meaning,

And of possibility.

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Sarah Hope Guppy's avatar

Whatever junk and treasure The world lifts up - so wonderful Rachel!

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Jane Longley's avatar

Yes, that line really stood out to me too - so true, so real!

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Margaret Somerville's avatar

the daily processing, yes! much of that done here!

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Larry Brickner-Wood's avatar

Rachel, this is a wonderful witness to what it means to be alive. A wonderful poem.

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Sarah Hope Guppy's avatar

It's the little things -

Toes in the grass -

A certain cloud,

Or light,

Or colour in the sky -

My daughter

Leaning in unprompted

For a cuddle -

These things

That cause me to pause,

To take a sacred breath,

Are the best reminders

Of how simply precious

It is to be alive.

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Margaret Somerville's avatar

Thank you for these reminders of the little things and the precious gift they are.

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Sarah Hope Guppy's avatar

You are welcome! I need these reminders too Margaret - it's a big part of why I write, and why I love taking part in communities such as this one 💜

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Margaret Somerville's avatar

Same!

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Larry Brickner-Wood's avatar

This is very nice, Sarah. As I read it, each time it brings a feeling of peace. “To take a sacred breath.” It is indeed precious to be alive. Thank you!

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Sarah Hope Guppy's avatar

I am glad to contribute a little to you feeling some peace Larry ☺️

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Larry Brickner-Wood's avatar

This is a beautiful poem, Kaitlin. I like the “you are alive” refrain and the wonderful descriptions for how and what that is. “and it/makes the whole/earth rumble with/joy every time/you realize it,”. Catches me and leaves me heart-full. And thank you for the explanation of how you come up with the words and prompts.

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A. Wilder Westgate's avatar

Did you know?

You can wake up every day and begin again.

It is never too late because there is no end.

The world is old,

but you can see it anew at any moment.

Your eyes can be closed

even when they are open.

All this time you have been growing

and trying to survive.

Did you know?

It's not too late

to be truly alive.

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Katie Spring's avatar

"the world is old, but you can see it anew" ❤️ I love these lines!

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Sarah Hope Guppy's avatar

Ooooof, this is very good for me to hear right now A, thank you 😊💜

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A. Wilder Westgate's avatar

Thank you! The sacred pause you wrote about in your poem is something I needed as well. 🧡

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Sarah Hope Guppy's avatar

I love it! Poetic reciprocity 😍

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Larry Brickner-Wood's avatar

This is such a poem of hope, renewal and resilience! "Did you know?/It's not too late/to be truly alive." Beautiful lines fit for a poster, or to say to a beloved who feels they are lost.

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Anne Melia's avatar

These beautiful lines below spoke to me deeply and provided an image I will keep in my heart always. Thank you Kaitlin for the love and light you bring into the world with your words.

Not like someone

who has disconnected

from their own

inner beauty, but

like a woman

taking her child

self by the hand

and vowing to never let go.

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Chuck's avatar

(mt11:30)

Busy and alive

are not yoked to each other.

ask god; not the church.

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Larry Brickner-Wood's avatar

Amen, Chuck!

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Margaret Somerville's avatar

The linear life from A to Z

where A is a gulping of new air

Yah

And Z is the expiration of time

Weh

I am somewhere in the middle of Decima’s thread

Pulled taut

Vibrating as each year is plucked.

But what if I could take that string and coil it round and round

Revisiting the dreams of youth

Touching points of death

And back again?

What if there is no scissor snip

No alphabet, amen, aho, ashe

But only ripples

In concentric waves

To say

I am

Alive

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Chuck's avatar

Aho.

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Barbara Chaapel's avatar

"vibrating as each year is plucked" beautiful

like yah weh is a harpist and you the harp.

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Sarah Hope Guppy's avatar

Sacred string of life, coiling, spiralling, and rippling on 💜

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Larry Brickner-Wood's avatar

This is beautiful, Margaret. "What if there is no scissor snip/No alphabet, amen, aho, ashe/But only ripples/In concentric waves/To say/I am/Alive" Truly lovely words.

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Korie's avatar

ALIVE

We are all the same

In our poverty,

Having nothing

To give to God

In payment for

What we receive,

After all we can’t make

Oxygen or water exist

Any more than

We can infuse breath

Or will our hearts

To beat without rest,

If we are honest,

We owe it all to

A higher power

Who thought it best

For us to possess

Only one thing - Life.

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Jacqueline's avatar

Life. And Love.

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Larry Brickner-Wood's avatar

Grace!

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Claire's avatar

Alive

Sunlight on my face

Blue cloudless sky and clear lake

I feel so alive!

(Currently feeling so lucky to be on the first day of our holiday in Italy)

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Larry Brickner-Wood's avatar

As some traditions do, greeting each morning with "it is a good day to be alive" can change the flow of a day. Thank you for a lovely reminder! Have a wonderful trip and holiday, Claire!

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Jane Longley's avatar

Alive

What does it mean to be alive?

To see the delicate pink of the dawn colour the sky

To hear the sweet song of the birds break the silence

To smell the temptation of baking bread

To taste the richness of freshly made coffee

To feel the love and hope of connecting with family and friends throughout the day

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Larry Brickner-Wood's avatar

What a lovely ode to living, being saive!

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Karen Mawyer's avatar

Visit

I don’t know if she recognized me

Though we’ve known each other for decades,

But her eyes met mine, and crinkled, as I joined her

At the sing along.

She knew most of the words, and sang along with others who encircled the room,

On their folding chairs, wheeled chairs, armchairs.

I sang too.

Flipping pages from one song to another was too much for her,

But she joined in again as her index finger found the place.

When it was time for me to leave I snapped a selfie of the two of us – my head at an impossible angle to stay in the frame.

I showed it to her, and she laughed.

Still alive! Alive! Alive!

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Larry Brickner-Wood's avatar

This is so very tender and sweet, Karen.

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Karen Mawyer's avatar

Thanks Larry.

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Jane Anderson's avatar

Alive is walking out the door on a cool morning after a night of rain.

Alive is coming across a fence full roses - their colors bright in the gray morning, drops of night rain still on the petals.

Alive is feeling despair in your heart over the suffering in the world, the starving children, and the melting glaciers, and the anger, and the fear, and and and

Alive is the love you feel for your own life.

Alive is walking on this beautiful cool gray morning, with the birds, and the traffic, and feeling all of everything at once.

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Larry Brickner-Wood's avatar

This is beautiful, Jane.

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Jane Anderson's avatar

Thank you Larry!

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jess's avatar

The prompt today reminds me of a song:

https://open.spotify.com/track/5m0AaCcveJ7o6Txm965xEd?si=cDi7ne-oRnKP8PlinD2x8w

Aisha Badru, Life to Live

Here is my poem:

I start the day half-empty

Then after the kid-out-the door chaos

Step into the park.

"Alive!"

Says the verdant green woods

Shouts the stream of buttercups

Sings the wild roses

"Alive!"

Replies the beating of my heart.

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Larry Brickner-Wood's avatar

What a wonderful poem of rhythm and heart, Jess!

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Steven Barbery's avatar

[being] alive

is more than

not being dead

being alive

is about

connection

to another

whether that is

gazing into

night sky

seeing stars

light years away

or

a lone hike

in the woods

surrounded by

creation

feeling

at home

relaxed

able to

breathe

and to

just be [alive]

for those that find

love - true love

even if it is

fleeting and

over now

the kisses

hand-holding

sharing

desserts and chores

these moments of

being alive

are glimpses of

resurrection

calling out

beckoning us

to come

to be

alive

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Larry Brickner-Wood's avatar

This is very nice, Steven. I like the connections, and the evocation of resurrection.

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