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Trish Townsend's avatar

A Dreamscape Haiku

the clouds above me

look like the ocean’s surface

am I in the deep?

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Lisa Jensen's avatar

The world is matte and blurred from smoke

or haze or the reluctance of dawn

after the longest night,

as if the land had tossed and turned,

then finally slept

and now can’t bear

the thought of light

so soon.

I walk into the sleep-blurred world

like into a dream.

I crunch my feet on frozen mud

to see if I’m awake

and puff great clouds of breath

to know that I’m alive.

A dog barks over and over,

Three short yips, then a vowel as long

as a rooster’s tail.

The dog crows and breaks the dawn

of the first day

after the longest night.

The dark lid begins to lift.

A blue eye peers through heavy clouds.

Today, I will pinch myself

and remember that I am awake.

Today, I will pinch myself

and remember to dream.

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