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Jeanette Mayo's avatar

Grandmother

All I know about grandmothers

is that my father was young when he lost his mother,

which is why I write “paternal grandmother” and “colon cancer” on those medical history forms.

He told me I have her eyes.

I wonder if her gut was as wounded as mine.

And my maternal grandmother was left behind in the country my mother ran away from,

haunted and unable to escape becoming an abuser herself.

All I know about grandmothers came from storybooks and movies.

I am old enough to be one—recently at the park a darling three year old confused me with her Nana—

but I am not.

My eldering reaches farther back than family,

when I pick up the fossil turtle femur I found in the Montana badlands in my younger decades

and feel the 65 million year old weight of ancient earth history,

a piece of Turtle Island heavy in my palm

from a time when dinosaurs ruled and turtles were enormous.

My ancestors are rock and moon,

stars and trees;

my lifespan diminished yet preserved into significance,

lovingly linked and held by the fullness of time.

jess's avatar

I love the story you weave with the imagery, and the ending "lovingly linked"

Jeanette Mayo's avatar

Thank you! At first I was going to skip this prompt because I thought oh I have nothing to say about that one, but early morning insomnia somehow put words together!

Margaret Somerville's avatar

The scope of this is powerful, from the most intimate wounded gut to connection with the time when turtles were enormous.

Your "but I am not" hit me. I feel that.

Jeanette Mayo's avatar

Thank you! 🙏 My father was estranged from his family, my mother ran away from hers, I did not have children of my own, so I struggle to feel connected in ways most people are. I just read Elissa Altman’s comment on her Substack about how nature is the original parent, and that has definitely been true for me.

Barbara Chaapel's avatar

Nature as parent is true for me, too, Jeanette.

Margaret Somerville's avatar

And nature teaches us so much more about that creative power we all have.

Stefanie Zito's avatar

Three rivers connect me with my grandmothers

Situated on the Allegheny, I am a bridge

between my paternal and maternal grandmothers.

My paternal grandmother flows north

to meet me. The Monogahela.

Together we converge with the Ohio, drifting

through states to reach my maternal grandmother

Of Kentucky’s western rim.

I’m a nesting doll carried through the ages

Stitched within contained, shadowed spaces

The needle plunges through the connected cloth

Dipping below where I cannot see

Maintaining the line through age– a labyrinthine lineage.

I imagine the threads that stretch

In these unseen places between us

Are frayed and tangled, yet bound up in each other.

A net emerges that catches much in the rivers of life.

A testament to how much women carry.

Tethered, anchored, holding still.

Brenda Curtice's avatar

So fine image: “A net emerges that catches much in the rivers of life.

A testament to how much women carry.”

Chuck's avatar

Karen is great

At 68

My wife of forty three years.

But one year as gee-gee

& i can see her

Re-clicking on all her gears.

Steven Barbery's avatar

I appreciate the perspective shift. Thank you for sharing

Marisa Goudy's avatar

The cards all speak of lovers this morning

Eros has made coffee and wants to stretch beside me

Tease me to a new awakening within this well-known room

I’m in a sweatshirt that belonged to my mother

I’ve got Nanna’s blanket to keep off the chill

I’m wearing the sort of underpants that a woman’s meant to bleed in

Oracle, take your diamond, swans, and curved hips

Leave me to my lost mother lost grandmother dreams

But no… The earth is unfolding with a trillion parted lips

Tree passions parted to drink May morning sun

Grandmother comfort

Grandmother eros

Grandmother time

Get dressed

But first, get undressed

Come play

Margaret Somerville's avatar

The earth is unfolding with a trillion parted lips! This is rich in kind of words we are meant to bleed in. Thank you.

Marisa Goudy's avatar

Thank you for helping me feel into this line even more vividly, Margaret

Kaitlin Curtice's avatar

Yessss!! 🌀🌀🪶🪶

Marisa Goudy's avatar

This week has a THEME! So grateful for this chance to see and feel it from yet another angle.

Fauna Lang's avatar

Being new here is a fabulous wonder. You all stir up so much in me. Thank you!!

Steven Barbery's avatar

Wow. Thank you for sharing.

I really appreciate the subtle intertwining of life life and loss. Birth and death are never mentioned but I can feel them present with your words.

Barbara Chaapel's avatar

Grandmother

After Pappy died they sold the cows.

Taking the dairy out of dairy farm.

Mamie lived alone in the big yellow farmhouse

A short dumpy woman with rheumy hazel eyes,

her gray hair netted into an untidy bun.

We went for Christmas the year after he died,

Just my parents and I

(my sister and the kids were in Rhode Island

with in-laws).

I didn’t want to be there,

resented missing friends

and joyous Christmases past.

Instead, I had a sad metal tabletop Christmas tree,

no presents beneath it

and a crusty grandmother I was half afraid of.

Pappy, with warm sun-browned skin and twinkling eyes

and smelling of Redman tobacco,

had been my favorite—beloved grandparent of choice.

Christmas Eve brought high clouds

drifting past a full moon.

It had snowed lightly.

The old barn, familiar like a friend, drew me,

and I asked Mamie to go with me.

It was almost midnight.

We bundled up in coats and scarves

and started across the icy path.

I put my arm around her

to keep us both from falling.

We were a sad pair,

both longing for things that were not there.

We reached the barn.

I pulled back the rusty latch and

opened the splintered wooden door

and we stepped into the darkness.

The sweet smell of hay hung in the still air

holding the memories of hay forts built

as children, and the gentle mooing of the cows.

I felt tears on my face

and turned to see her weeping too.

Unexpectedly, a high fluttering sound.

We looked up together

and a barn owl soared slowly, quietly

across the space under the high rafters.

I clutched the stiff wool of her coat.

Something thawed between us.

Brenda Curtice's avatar

Such a blessing when hearts thaw. I’m glad you had that moment.

Margaret Somerville's avatar

They are present in the birds, aren’t they? Sometimes working their thawing magic in ways they couldn’t before. What a stirring glimpse into a moment, Barbara.

Barbara Chaapel's avatar

Thank you for seeing this important moment in my life, Margaret.

A. Wilder Westgate (she/they)'s avatar

"We have an invisible string between us,"

I told the stranger in the grocery store

when he remarked about how close we were;

always connected.

You're still here, but it's been years

since my hand has been in yours.

I'm still not sure whether it would be more

painful to see you again only

to lose you, or to go on

feeling this incessant pull.

Margaret Somerville's avatar

That invisible string and pull is so very real and tangible. Thank you for illuminating the pain of its tug.

Natasha (elle/she/her)'s avatar

Eda means stories/grandmothers in the Old Language.

My Oma is now with the Edas.

They hold me as I let myself sink

Into their roots

into their hands.

For the first time I understand

Home.

Land.

Belonging.

Something within me that was broken remembers itself

I am whole again.

Liz Moen's avatar

Grandmother Moon

Lights a path

Across the water.

Who will go?

Francesca Tolond's avatar

Grandma

Grandma in the singular, I had two

One in a city and one in the country.

They were not known as Grandmas

But Nana.

The one in the country was brisk and deaf

She kept chickens and lived in a railway carriage

Her loo was a place of intense fascination

A plank with two holes across a stream.

It was an eternity of buses, trains more buses and a long walk.

I felt I was going back in time to a place

Where children were seen and not heard.

The one in the city was arthritic and on her own

She had lost brothers and husband during the war.

Nana was idiosyncratic and loved markets to pick up junk.

She was what my mother called ‘a card’.

Her loo, too was a place too intense fascination.

She lived in the fifth floor flat in a building that was old

But she had an outside loo!

It was across the open space with a veranda

On the right only connected to that space.

I was going back in time again

Where children were seen, heard but

Did not understand the adults.

Nanas, in the plural

Both odd and Victorian

Difficult to be with

One in the city and one in the country.

FJT 3.5.26

Colleen's avatar

My Nana

Oh to know her now and to learn from her

Memories of sitting on her lap in the garden hearing her talk

I was so young then and I have so many questions now

Stories, please tell me stories Nana.

Her mom died when she was one and she went to live with grandma Dooley. Her other 5 sisters went to the orphanage, her oldest sister was 13 and went to work as a maid. Her father had to work across the bay at the shipyard. Nana was so young.

I want to hear from her about the 1906 earthquake in San Francisco when she was 10 and the rats and fires everywhere. Was she afraid? What was it like? The '89 quake here was terrifying. I can only imagine.

What was it like living with grandma Dooley? The photos show Grandma Dooley holding a potato in her lap. Did she ever tell my nana about leaving Ireland during the famine alone sailing across the sea? She was so young.

I look at my Nana's photos and see my cheeks and my eyes.

Her rosary beads hang over the frame.

Her faith was strong, going to church saying her prayers while her children played on the steps and waited outside.

Faithfulness, determination and strength are in the photos of her and the few stories I've heard from our ancestors.

I'm Thankful for what was shared

but Nana,

I want to hear more stories.

Brenda Curtice's avatar

MAY 3, 2026

GRANDMOTHER

Five sons and four daughters

Birthed in an old farm house

On the prairie of Nebraska

A German from Russia

She was settled, yet flustered,

Stubborn, stern, and determined.

Her hair coiled everyday in a bun

With an apron worn always atop her house dress,

And with hands work-worn with large swollen knuckles

She prepared plates brimming with potatoes

Mashed, fried, boiled and raw

To temper the hunger of the Great Depression

Clothes scrubbed by hand in a tub in the basement

Were rolled flat through the wringer

Then hung outdoors to dry in the sun.

Little energy was left by the end of the day

To answer unending questions from her granddaughter come to stay.

Bony knuckles she rapped on top of my head

“You chatter too much, sweetie. Please stop!!”

My grandmother said.

Placed in a casket early in a cold February,

Five sons and four daughters gathered round.

Each mourned and wept at her passing.

My tiny black leather shoes

Sank into the deep, white snow

When we laid her to rest before I turned six.

I celebrate this mother of nine,

Who tended family and farm,

Regretting the small time she had left for grandmothering.

Steve Peterson's avatar

Grandmother

She keeps saying she is old

And keeps apologizing that

She doesn’t do much

Anymore.

First of all, she is incorrect

About not doing anything

Anymore.

What about that amazing

Dinner last night.

And, what’s really a big deal,

She doesn’t fully realize, as

Much as she loves and adores

Them and knows they love and

Adore her, that she is the ground

Beneath her grandchildren’s feet.

She is the skip in their hop, the light

In their eyes, the peace in their storms.

That’s not nothing. That’s life

Being renewed and rooted

In love.

That’s grandmother nurture of

roots for trees

To blossom.

That’s, well, a lot,

Don’t you think?

Sarita Robb-Scott's avatar

I do think! Beautiful.

Margaret Somerville's avatar

I do think. Being the ground and the roots is a mighty something.

Margaret Somerville's avatar

Zipped the jacket up to my chin

Wound the cabled scarf around my neck

A tender embrace of stitches fashioned just the way you taught me

(looking in a mirror because I was a south-paw)

-

Out I set to find you, peeking through the ripples of evening clouds

that remind me of the softness of your wrinkles

flooding your face with waves of compassion.

Others by my side in the designated time and place

to walk and honor

walk and observe

walk and chat

walk and chant

walk and welcome your flowery fullness.

-

But you guarded your riches

dissipated in the foggy eve

lest we melt like Semele in the purity of your divinity.

And we basked in your gentler, numinous gaze.

-

Home. Home. To put the kettle on.

Your practice ringing in my ears.

Settled in my window seat for a quick cuppa

and a read before the deep dreams of sleep.

I reach to pull the blinds -

and there you are.

In all the brightness of your heart.

Just for me.

-

And like the secrets that we shared

in summer nighttime giggles in the bed

you whispered in my ear:

all is well.

Brenda Curtice's avatar

A lovely gift:

I reach to pull the blinds -

and there you are.

In all the brightness of your heart.

Just for me.

Margaret Somerville's avatar

Thanks, Brenda!

Stacie Wenndt's avatar

If I called you answered

even in Walmart while you tried

to find the Ginko Biloba to help you

not forget

On the ride home from the airport

wide left turn with a truck in our way

you missed him barely exclaiming

"left shoulder isn't working so great"

"Three dollars for an avocado is highway robbery!"

you announced loudly in the store

I bought 2

and was declared the best chef ever at dinner.

I was states away when you died

I received the text and thought it was maybe a joke

Mom didn't know either

silence and worry it took time to find out

there was no service

there was no eulogies

there was no gathering

it got complicated

Your namesake, my daughter

Carries your sass and your beauty

but little girl me sure could use your advice

your humor and the way you made space feel kind

I saved your voicemails of you complaining

I wasn't home, doing things with out you

Probably causing trouble, buying yummy food

sleeping in late or just ignoring you

I laugh now when I listen

shared them with mom and she

always says afterwards

we were so lucky to have you as ours.

Margaret Somerville's avatar

Kaitlin, I'm so grateful to be learning these words through you. Thank you for bringing them into our vocabulary and our practice. The dried flower petals on your head, a crown - LOVE this! The liminality of dreaming and waking, everywhere and nowhere, marking time in ways we cannot understand.

Gloria Berlin's avatar

I have become the grandmother I didn't have.

When the grandchildren are born, it's like watching your own again.

The joy of the love and the memory of your own is shockingly unimaginable.

I am so grateful for our grandchildren

We have 5,3 girls and two boys

And they are the joys of my life.

It amazes me,the love that is so deep within our hearts, for them.

I've heard it said "why didn't we have grandchildren first"

And I'm so grateful that I had my children first so that I can really enjoy our grandchildren.