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Karen Mawyer's avatar

Wounds

When my pulse begins to rise

And my breath begins to vibrate

And the tenor of my speech gets hot

Making me feel wound up tighter than a top

I marvel at Grace as it once again steps in

And with a fingertip gently unwinds my hurting heart.

Katie Spring's avatar

I love how you use both pronunciations and meanings of wound in this poem - I can feel the energy of winding up and then easing.

Margaret Somerville's avatar

Was going to say the same thing about the two uses of wound. It catches in just the perfect way.

Christian Totty's avatar

The last words of each line—rise, vibrate, hot, top, in, heart—feel like bass notes.

Nicole Boehrig's avatar

Ooo love the imagery of Grace stepping in to unwind. Mm!

Katie Spring's avatar

wound

come in close, listen

even in the deepest hurt

stardust hums in your bones

this wound is not

the end, you have imagined

yourself into being

countless times before

this wound is a portal :

imaginal

cells waking

transformation is

never easy, even

when you want it.

before this ache there was

a spark. bring it all

with you: the despair

the howling joy

weave a cord

of stardust and soil

feel the hum and roots

imagine, imagine

what love may grow

Nancy E. Holroyd, RN's avatar

I love, the idea of the wound as a portal. Beautiful imagery woven throughout this poem.

Katie Spring's avatar

Thank you, Nancy ❤️

Christian Totty's avatar

Really love the sound and feeling of: "before this ache there was a spark."

Margaret Somerville's avatar

Yes - the wound is a portal - humming with stardust. Grateful to stand here at this portal with you all.

Nicole C. Livengood's avatar

"Stardust hums in your bones" -- beautiful!

Steven Barbery's avatar

wound

if only

I had just one

so many things

have wounded me

over the years

the trauma of

all the abuse

and poverty

traveling this journey

through

exile and wilderness

heart and mind

body and soul

battered and broken

****

sigh

****

though the

lifetime of wounds

still heal

I am most blessed

that God

has healed the wound

in my sight

not only

the way

I see myself

but

the way

I see others

****

inhale

****

exhale

****

I see the wounds

that mask themselves

as coping mechanisms

covering deeper pain

I wasn't ready to face

I see the wounds

the trauma and abusers

got me to

blame myself for

****

sigh

****

I see more clearly

the wounds

of others people

not to judge them

or try to do

their healing for them

but so I can

accompany them

on their healing journey

telling their story

and naming their wounds

I can also

be a vessel of

God's grace

on those days

when they are

out of sorts

whatever that looks like

****

inhale

****

exhale

****

for all of my wounds

I can see

especially ones

that are healing

I give thanks

each wound

comes from experience

gives perspective

and

when healing

offers wisdom

barb's avatar

love your words and the power in your wounds

Natasha (elle/she/her)'s avatar

The way you showed breath... Love.

Sarita Robb-Scott's avatar

Stunning. Thank you for sharing.

Margaret Somerville's avatar

moving from sigh to inhale and exhale. and then again. I love the rhythm of this. Breathing in such different ways.

Nancy E. Holroyd, RN's avatar

Thank you for sharing what seems so deeply personal. Blessings to you.

Jeanette Mayo's avatar

Welcome

Opening to

Unity with human and earthy

Nature, all my efforting

Dissolves

Kristen Masterson's avatar

"efforting" I love that!

Jeanette Mayo's avatar

Efforting is something I do far too much of! Pain is an equalizer sometimes.

Steve Peterson's avatar

The Wounds I Carry

I’m a long-distance trucker,

I’ve got to keep moving,

There’s a cargo of wounds

In the trailer, frozen and secure.

Down the road they will be unloaded.

But not now. I’ve got to just keep moving…

Do you see me passing by?

Natasha (elle/she/her)'s avatar

Oh what an amazing metaphor. I've never thought of it that way!

Nicole C. Livengood's avatar

"There's a cargo of wounds/in the trailer" is a beautiful image. Thank you!

Margaret Somerville's avatar

I seem them defrosting as you pass by and keep moving!

Nancy E. Holroyd, RN's avatar

Who hasn’t been wounded

by the arrows of love?

Who hasn’t been wounded

by the grief of loss?

Wounds to the body,

the soul,

the flesh,

the bone?

Wounds to the skin,

the viscera,

the brain?

Dig deep enough and

you will find beauty

amongst the rubble.

Keep searching and

you will find

peace for your soul.

After all,

wounds do heal

and joy remains

like a tiny seedling,

waiting to bloom again.

Katie Spring's avatar

I love those last lines! Such a bright ending that feels like a beginning ❤️

Brenda Curtice's avatar

Joy remains like a tiny seedling waiting to bloom again

Margaret Somerville's avatar

The seeds planted in the wounds!

Nancy E. Holroyd, RN's avatar

I love that thought, yes! Thank you, Margaret.

Vanessa Wallace's avatar

Wound

The greatest wound is believing we are separate from

one another

The land

The sky

The sea

Ourself

Believing we own

One another

The land

The sky

The sea

Ourself

Pointing at the evil outside

Ignoring what inside us

Allows us to know what we are

Pointing at.

A hierarchical system of goodness

We are fighting one another

to move up the line

Blindly striving for a gold medal

That does not exist.

Addressing the wound

Is simple

Get out of line

Run our hands across the long grass

Ground ourself in relationship with

Reciprocity to

One another

the land

The sky

The sea

Ourself.

Margaret Somerville's avatar

one, long slice

from heart to gut

through layers of cloaks

I had pulled around me

to cover my core.

safety built in skins

hardened and calloused

tender and bruised

pink and pulsing.

_

Now butterfly-cut from top to tail

a ribcage cracked like a thoracotomy

open to the air for the first time

there she is

revealed

alive.

Nancy E. Holroyd, RN's avatar

I love this imagery so much. Especially this: "Now butterfly-cut from top to tail a ribcage cracked like a thoracotomy open to the air for the first time there she is revealed alive."

Truly relatable.

Eran Mccarty's avatar

To make a slash in the the skin of their soul, a casual wound , caused without much thought.

Receive your own wounds, to your heart, to your confidence.

We walk through life bearers of these many scars searching for healing

Mindfulness opens the heart to stop the knife of our tongue and blows we cause without much thought

And thus begins the healing of a community

Nancy E. Holroyd, RN's avatar

I like how you took the personal hurt and healing and lifted it out to community.

Margaret Somerville's avatar

yes, and the reminder of how causally they can be inflicted

Stefanie Zito's avatar

Marred by life’s sharper moments

We see and recoil

We experience and cower

We wince and withdraw.

We are pierced, yet we endure

Looking through the raw lens

We marvel intervals of renewal

The slow magic of our body’s wisdom

Witness to the wonder of our wounds

The bright veins of verbose pain

Chart the path and tell the story

Of what was weathered and what remains.

These marks carry history of despair

The messy quest of restoration

And evidence of repair.

Healing lives inside the wound.

Margaret Somerville's avatar

Witness to the wonder of our wounds!

Marisa Goudy's avatar

Are your wounds mine?

I hold your hand in the triage queue

Weep and rage, my darling

I’m here

You bleed

Barbed wire caught your hips, elbows, ankles

Your brave bid to feel free

I soak up blood with tissues from my purse

(Clean, I promise, clean enough)

I hold your hand

Never mind the way the hot and slick becomes my own crust

I am fine

I am fine

Are they your wounds or mine?

Margaret Somerville's avatar

Thank you for taking me into that triage queue. Wow. Nevermind the way the hot and slick becomes my own crust. Sitting with this!

Kat's avatar

Carbon

our breath exchanged

until it turned to carbon —

a copy of me sunk into the soles

of you

tripping over an old wound

festered and fervent, in singularity and solitude

scar tissue molds a spirit

into something

familiar and cruel

two tongues, abandoned

learning the language of punishment

stinging nettles and ivy

vined into one

Mona Chopra's avatar

Wound

We

Owe

U

Nuthin’

Dear

is that what a wound is?

to be forsaken?

forgotten?

-

in Chinese medicine

there are times

we create a wound on purpose,

just a small one,

like whispering instructions into the third ear:

now. do it. go. —

heal.

Kristen Masterson's avatar

Wound

I was trying so hard,

How did I hurt you so?

With time,

I hope this wound will heal,

Until then,

I let go.

Kate Hennessy-Keimig's avatar

Wound - a haiku

Scars are what remains

When the wound finally heals

Just a memory.

kate bremer's avatar

Today's topic is "wound"....I quickly return to "medicine"

I never got to it yesterday. "wound" has pushed me,

turned me around. I pick up concoctions: tanager,

grosbeak, painted bunting, wet lichen, and sunlight.

I decorate my medicine oak where I rest and open,

grateful my little herd will sleep stretched out in the sun today,

absorbing fire and air and earth. I just remembered

I spent 40 minutes this morning treating fly bites

on Cinderella, my donkey. I dab healing clay on her wounds,

then use a plastic grocery bag to cover her muddy hoof,

so I can slip the silver-infused ant-microbial socks onto to her legs.

Not easy, I'm too old for this. Another fly boot Velcroes over the socks;

this stays on til tomorrow night when the socks get washed

and the wounds air out. The precious rains always bring biting flies.